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Author: Chris Cho

.github/pull_request_template.md

@@ -3,13 +3,14 @@
 Please read
 [Style Guide Review Process](https://wiki.corp.mongodb.com/display/DE/Technical+Writer+Style+Guide+Review+Process)
 
-For contributors (MongoDB internal only), this includes the following actions:
+For contributors, this includes the following actions:
 
 - Requesting the PR review in #docs-style-guide Slack channel.
-- Waiting for review approvals from all the team reps. One of the team reps
-  will merge the PR and notify you of the merge in the Slack channel.
+- Waiting for review approvals from all the team reps. Once all approvals are
+  received, One of the team reps will merge the PR and notify you of the merge 
+  in the Slack channel.
 
-# Pull Request  Description
+# Pull Request Description
 
 JIRA - <https://jira.mongodb.org/browse/DOCSP-NNNNN>
 Staging - <https://docs-mongodbcom-staging.corp.mongodb.com/drivers/docsworker-xlarge/NNNNN/>